“Copywriting: Now You Can Discover The Best Kept Secrets Of The World’s Great Persuaders”

 

	How to write "converts like magic" copy
	How to get your readers to read every word
	How to avoid the ‘response-crushing’; ‘profit-destroying’ mistakes

 

And you’ll be using these secrets within 24 hours

 

Personal message from Peter Thomson

 

Hello,

 

The problem is this...   To succeed in any business you and I have to be able to persuade our customers to buy – true?   Well – we can do this face-to-face or in writing – through email, direct mail, letters, proposals and our websites.   Therefore: The skills of writing persuasive, powerful and passionate copy are ESSENTIAL to our business and personal success.        If we can’t be persuasive – then no matter how brilliant our products and services – not enough people will buy them and the business will fail!

 

It’s such a shame...

 

     To see so many good people and good businesses struggling to make any serious money just because they can’t get customers interested in what they supply – and can’t get enough of them to buy.

 

Here’s the GOOD NEWS...

 

Now you can have your copy of my latest programme:
 

“The Best Kept Secrets of The World's Great Copywriters!”

A professionally edited recording of my intensive two-day seminar – at 50% off the normal retail price – and even better on FREE TRIAL. 

Yes...

 

You only pay the postage and packing and I’ll send you the whole home-study course on a FREE TRIAL

 

Then...

 

      You have it for 30 days; listen to the CDs (there’s 6 of them) read through the detailed action guide to personalise all the ideas – and only after 30 days decide it’s for you.

 

Is this a fair deal – one we can trust each other on?

 

     Yes - if you decide it’s not for you – send it back to me and there’s nothing more to pay – and you can keep the Special Bonuses with my compliments and my personal ‘thanks’ for trusting me and trying the course

 

     If you decide it is for you – do nothing more and I’ll charge your credit card for just the 50% Off price (plus vat where applicable) – 30 days after you received it – it’s completely your decision.

So what are you going to discover...

 

#1: How to use ‘Parallel Logic’ in your email, direct mail and website – this positions your readers so they want to know how you can help them   #2: How to employ ‘These Special Words’ to get your readers to read every word you wrote – all the way to the ‘take action’ step. Just think how many more sales this makes   I altered one of my major client’s lead generation letters with this technique and DOUBLED their response rates!   #3: The sheer power of ‘THREES’ – the technique of the Great speakers and writers who ever lived – listeners and readers are mesmerised by your passion, your power, your persuasiveness   #4: How to avoid the ‘3 Order Form Mistakes’ – increases your sales and profits   #5:  The little know SECRET to intrigue your readers and have them want to know more about what you supply – this is just so powerful   #6: How to use The 5 Headline Rules – increases the number of people who read your words and increases subsequent sales   #7: The 4-Letter Word – this needs removing from 99% of your copy – Why? Because it makes your words far more connected to your reader – many people just don’t know about this.   #8: I was shown a simple technique by legendary wordsmith Ted Nicholas; I ignored it until 2 years ago. But – when I tried it – what a fool I’d been waiting for years to realise how deceptively simple and yet mind-blowing clever it is. This will take your persuasive copywriting skills to an advanced level you’d never thought possible!   #9: You know about asking for ‘yes’ – don’t you? Well – there’s one ‘YES’ question you must never ask – get this wrong and you can kiss the sale goodbye!

 

 

#10: You will understand how Broca’s Area plays its part in your message being received and understood – and then and only then – action takes place. People do what you want them to do – place an order; respond to your offer – this is insightful information you must be using in your words   #11: If you’re into NLP – you may know about Syntactic Ambiguity – I’ll explain how you use it with integrity to increase your conversions and sales   #12: The W.I.S.C.D.A.R. process gives you a template to create any persuasive copy you want. You’ll use it for emails, direct mail, website, flyers and brochures and see your income rise as you do   #13: How and where to use photographs in your copy to increase responses – and how to avoid the critical mistake so many people make with this   #14: The meaning of the strange word: Vraisemblance – and just how you use – increases the persuasiveness of every sentence you craft and makes you more money   #15: The 6 Factors of Influence – you can become irresistibly persuasive when you speak and when you write   #16: Want to be more creative? Using these 3 Creative Techniques you will be   #17: And another 28 proven real world ideas to take your copywriting skills to the top level – so you craft persuasive words, phrases and sentences to (simply put) make more money

Here’s what some of the delegates had to say:

 

	"I was sceptical before attending Peter's copywriting workshop. However, Peter showed me how to structure my copy for maximum impact and demonstrated how so many get it wrong-including some of the big corporates! By implementing the strategies and tips we sold all the seats for our very next seminar.  This is something we'd had toiled over in the past but never achieved!" - Nick Horton, Essential Dealership Training
	"I had a great time at the copywriting seminar and I learned so much. There were so many new ideas that I can implement straightaway (as well as reminders of things I should be doing but had forgotten about)." - Susan Clegg

 

"Since attending the Peter Thomson copywriting course, I'm glad to say we have started to implement a number of different changes in the way we market our business.  I was amazed to see what power writing persuasive copy can have, not only on attracting new clients but also and as importantly the impact it can have on our existing clients.  The techniques I have picked up are priceless not only on copywriting but also on how to run a business!" - Daniel Fletcher

 

"Peter Thomson’s copywriting course has given me a whole range of ideas about how best to promote my business. I have incorporated all my learnings into letters to clients, presentations, surveys, our web site and our marketing campaigns. Our initial response rates have gone up by 15% and we are currently discussing contracts worth ten-fold the investment we made on the course. As always, I would strongly recommend Peter’s services and expertise." - Simon Teague, Senior partner, Javelin Business Strategies

 

"I was intrigued and curious, what would I gain from attending the "Writing persuasive copy" course? In the process of launching my first business - Boundless UK, I had so many questions: What motivates people to buy, what are they trying to achieve, what are their needs and how do I market my products and services?  WOW! Peter's course provided answers to these questions and so much more. Peter gave simple, easy to use tools and techniques, which have, proven 'MASSIVE' impact on writing great persuasive copy, in order to get your customers, keep your customers and WOW them!"  - Nicola Masters

 

"Thanks for the course, it was terrific. Since then I’ve  decided I can definitely make a go of copywriting; set up my website; written a free report for visitors to the website to capture contact details; started advertising my services... and got my first client So…I would highly recommend the course to anyone who wants – or needs – to use writing to sell anything.  It’s fun, it’s effective and it’s very practical!" - Charlotte Fleming, Freelance Writer.

Important thought...

 

      What do you think knowing these critical copywriting skills would be worth to you and your business? £1000 a month? £2000? £5000? Whatever the figures it has to be more than £497 – doesn’t it?

 

And so...

 

     Rather than pay the £2,000 per head the delegates paid to attend the seminar to discover these proven skills – now you can have them all for a fraction of the price.

 

Yes – for just £497 (plus vat where applicable) you’ll be using them within 24 hours. Changing the words of all your marketing messages to be even more persuasive than ever before:

 

·         Enjoying higher conversion rates   ·         Seeing increased profits   ·         Having more personal cash

 

Here’s what happens:

 

     I’ll immediately send the complete home-study course to you. Over the next 30 days you listen to the CDs – read through the action guide; use all the templates and decide if you like what you're hearing and can see how much more persuasive you are – and how you make more money.

 

Then the next step is:

 

     1.      If for any reason you don’t like the programme or think it won’t do I what I’ve promised it will for you – send it back to me and you’ll have nothing to pay whatsoever – you’ll just have my thanks for at least trying it and trusting me. My full contact details are in the packaging.

 

     2.      You do like it (And judging by the feedback I’ve received I think you will)– in which case a full 30 days after you receive it - I’ll charge your credit card with only: The SPECIAL tgiMondays Members ONLY – 50% OFF PRICE

 

Oh and one more thing...

Your FREE ‘Keep Whatever Happens’ Bonus
Value: £100+
 

Yes – to make this even better for you – I like to give you a Special Free Bonus – it’s a copy of the recorded interview I did with Professor Robert Cialdini – one of the world’s leading experts in persuasion – the author of the best-selling book: Influence: Science and Practice.   You listen to this master persuader explain in his own words precisely how and why people are prompted to say ‘Yes’ – I’ll do it.

EXTRA: ‘First 100 People Only’ Special Bonus 

Value: £200 ++

 

      And - as an extra special bonus – if you're one of the first 100 people to get your Free Trial on The Best Kept Secrets of The World’s Great Copywriters – then you’ll be invited to attend a one and half hour tele-meeting with me where you can ask me any questions about the programme and your implementation of the ideas. I’ll record our meeting and let you have copy of the recording.

 

EXTRA: ‘90 Days More Money-Back’ Guarantee

 

And because...

 

     I want the The Best Kept Secrets of The World’s Great Copywriters to work brilliantly for you and be just such a worthwhile investment – even after you've paid for it 30 days after you've received it – I’ll then give you another 90 days to use the ideas – still covered by my money-back guarantee.

 

     Yes – if after a further 90 days you’re not getting more conversions and making more money – then simple send the home-study course back to me – and I’ll give you everything back you paid for it – without any questions or argument – you have my word on it.

 

What to do now...

 

Go ahead and get your FREE TRIAL now...
 

Kind regards 

Peter Thomson

Editor and Publisher

tgiMondays and The Best Kept Secrets of The World’s Great Copywriters

 

PS. Remember, there’s absolutely zero risk when you try this programme. Just listen to the CDs, read through the detailed action guide – use everything and if it’s not for you then just send it back and you’ll have nothing to pay.

 

PPS. And get your FREE ‘keep whatever happens’ bonus interview with master persuader Professor Robert Cialdini (Value £100+) The complete programme is yours for only £497 plus vat this is 50% OFF  (only payable after 30 days when you've tried it and proved it works for you)

 

YES! Today you only pay £2.95 towards p&p

 

Remember: If you’re one of the first 100 people to get The Best Kept Secrets of The World’s Great Copywriters you’ll also be invited to the exclusive ‘one-off’ tele-meeting with me where I’ll answer all your questions (Value £200++)

 

PLUS: The Extra 90 Days Money Back Guarantee – I want this to work for you; so if after a further 90 days you’re not enjoying more profits and easily making a substantial return on your investment – send the programme back to me and I’ll refund everything you paid – you have my word on it.

 

If you really want to be more persuasive than ever before (and make more profits and personal cash!) now then mouse here - there's no risk to you at all